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09/04/2019

am i going off topic for this essay?

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am i going off topic for this essay?
my essay writing prompt is who has the ability or power to hold back a race more, your own race or other races. my intro is Every race can hold back another but only if they allow it.Anyone has a choice to letting people control their life.Examples would be marrying into a family,going on a job interview or applying for college.< is this too boring? comments any constructive criticism, Thank you ANSWER This is a perfect way to start your essay. Just keep in mind the order of operations and you will do just fine. Like thesis, statement, supporting your essay, proof, restating, conculsion. Or however you want to write it. The beginning is perfect. Oh and one more thing, the sentence: Anyone has a choice to letting people control their life.Examples would be marrying into a family,going on a job interview or... it shouldn't be letting but Anyone has a choice to let people control their life. Use let instead of letting is sounds better and is the correct way to write it in my opinion.