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09/08/2019

can anybody revise/edit my illustration essay it has to be first or third person view?

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can anybody revise/edit my illustration essay it has to be first or third person view?
In my life experiences i have had many friends but good friends i only have had a few. I ask why? Then, I realize goods friends are harder to find than a blind man on the lookout for gold.Later, i asked myself what traits do all my good friends posses that my average colleagues or friends don’t?That’s when i thought about it and came up with three traits that they have in common.First they all dependable when time get hard or it’s neutral. Second, they all are honest no matter how hard the truth is. And third they all have the same interest as me. Open your mind and ears and get ready for an interesting ride.

First dependability is a huge trait all my good friends posses. I believe dependability demonstrate care for the friendship we have. For example when i was fifteen years old i wrote a love note to a girl named Carla, but i was too shy to give it to her, so my friend Poncho(very flirty person) gave it to her. When my friend Poncho gave Carla my love note, she laughed, but Poncho told her i was very passionate
about her ans she decided to go on a date. Ironic that my flirty friend knew i liked Carla and knew that i was depending on him, and he did not and he proved to be a dependable friend.

Whenever i fell bored, i call my good friend because we have same interest, which are girls and succeeding in our own and unique goals in life. For example there was when i used to be the class wierdo because i was the only kid in the class that like hairy girls. I was the the weirdo and that hurt my feelings but when a new student got trans fer to my class and he also like his girls hairy i felt in place. Me and the tranfer student but had same interst and i didn’t feel like a weirdo anymore becasuse we had so much in common and we felt like we were becoming good friends.There are many articals that have done studies that show proof ,that two people with same interest will haver a higher percentage of having a longer frindship then those who don’t.

i really apreciate when my friends are honest because to me it demonstrate a strong enough character to always tell the truth no matter, how hard times are. i believe honesty is so low, that if honesty was temperature the world would be in an Ice Age. My friends are so honest sometimes, they tell me how dumb or disattracitve i look in a green shirt. There was one time, when i had a mohowk for about two months becasue alot of my friends had it and i didn’t feel coftable with it. I thought i look really smooth with my mohowk but then, my friend told me i looked redicolus and he told me everyone taught i looked redicolus but they wanna tell me. My friend went to me and told me honestly what people taught about my hairdo.I really appriciated that becasue i know if there is a time when i need and honest answer he will give it to me.
As my conclusion i realize all my good friends are honest, have the same interest, and are dependable. i also realize to be a good friend and have some of those traits aswell.Overall, i can’t choose who a person is, but i can choose who my friends will be and who my closer friends will be. Al ways trying to find the perfect is not easy but finding a good friend is possible .

ANSWER
In my life experience, I have had many friends, but good friends? I have only had a few. I ask myself why, and then realize that good friends are harder to find than a blind man on the lookout for gold. Later, I asked myself what traits do all my good friends posses that my average colleagues or friends do not? I came up with three traits that they have in common. First, they are all dependable when times get hard or when it is neutral. Second, they all have the same interests as me. Last, they all are honest no matter how hard the truth is.

First, dependability is a huge trait all my good friends possess. I believe dependability demonstrates respect for the friendship we have. For example, when I was fifteen years old, I wrote a love note to a girl named Carla, but I was too shy to give it to her. My friend, Poncho, (a very flirty person) gave it to her for me. When he gave Carla my love note, she laughed, but Poncho told her i was very passionate
about her and she decided to go on a date with me. Ironic that my flirty friend knew I liked Carla and knew that I was depending on him, and he did not flirt with her, proving to be a dependable friend.

Whenever I feel bored, I call my good friends, because we have same interests, which are girls and succeeding in our own unique goals in life. There was a time when I used to be the class wierdo, because I was the only kid in the class that liked hairy girls. I was the the odd man out and that hurt my feelings. When a new student got transferred to my class and he also liked his girls hairy, I no longer felt out of place. Me and the transfer student had same interests and I didn’t feel like a weirdo anymore, because we had so much in common. We felt like we were becoming good friends. There are many articles that have done studies proving that two people with same interests will haver a higher percentage of having a longer frindship than those who do not.

I really appreciate when my friends are honest, because, to me, it demonstrates a strong enough character to always tell the truth no matter how hard times are. I believe honesty is so low, that if honesty was a temperature, the world would be in an Ice Age. My friends are so honest sometimes, they tell me how dumb or unattracitve I look in a green shirt. One time, I had a mohawk for about two months, because most of my friends had one, but I didn’t feel comfortable with it. I thought I looked really smooth with my mohawk, but then my friend told me I looked ridiculous and everyone thought so, but they did not want to tell me. My friend came to me and told me honestly what people thought about my hairdo. I really appreciated that, because I know if there is a time when I need an honest answer, he will give it to me.

As my conclusion, I realize all my good friends are dependable, have the same interests as me, and are honest. I also realize to be a good friend, I have those traits as well. Overall, I cannot choose who a person is, but I can choose who my friends will be and which of those will be closer to me. Always trying to find the perfect friendship is not easy, but finding a good friend is possible .