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09/08/2019

Can someone help me edit my point-by-point compare and contrast essay?

QUESTION
Can someone help me edit my point-by-point compare and contrast essay?
I am comparing harriet tubman and sojourner truth.
How much do you know about Harriet Tubman and Sojourner Truth? Harriet Tubman help escape over 300 slaves to freedom. Sojourner was known as a remarkable preacher whose influence “was miraclous.” Although both women did great things in history, Harriet Tubman had greater success and accomplished more in life.
Harriet Tubman and Sojourner Truth are similar in many ways. To begin with, the both of them were slaves. When they were bron they were automatically assigned to a plantation. In addition, when they bot got older, they changed their names. Harriet’s was Araminta; Sojourners was Isabella. Lastly, they both worked with anti-slavery organizations. Regardless how many similarities they have, there are quit a few differences.
The first point is that Harriet had no children; Sojourner had five children. Since Sojourner had five children, it kinda held her back from traveling. When she left New York City, she had to take her youngest child with her. Harriet had no children, so she could travel without anything holding her back. When she headed north for freedom, se didn’t hae any kids holding her back. Even though they had differences, the sill accomplished alot.
A second point is that Harriet got hit with a two pound weight; Sojourner was hit with a bundle of branches. Since they were both owned, they got hit often. Sojourner got hit because of her actcent. Harriet got hit because she defended a fellow slave. Sojourner mostly got hit because of frequent mis communications.On the Other hand Harriet mostly got hit because of helping fellow slaves. If you were a fellow slave, Harriet would get hit to free you. This is another difference between two of the greatest women in history.
The finally point is that Harriet led slaves through the underground railroad; Sojourner was a preacher. Harriet led over 300 slaves north, to freedom. Se accomplished this in 1849. Also Harriet did so much that she was wanted in the south. If you found her, the reward was $40,000. Sojourner became really religious and started preaching. These are the finally differences of Harriet Tubman and Sojourner Truth.
Although both women did great things in history, Harie had greater success, and accomplished more in life. Harriet is better than Sojourner because she would do anything to free slaves, she would get hit with two pound weights for them. I thought this was great because if you would get hit for fellow slaves, you deserved so much respect. I respect her so much for that. Subsequently Harriet simply accomplished more things; I am truly thankful for her.

ANSWER
Very informal and several mistakes (did you proof-read it)?

“Harriet Tubman help escape over 300 slaves to freedom.” => helped

“Regardless how many similarities they have, there are quit a few differences.” => Regardless “of” & quite not quit

“Since Sojourner had five children, it kinda held her back from traveling. ” => omit kinda

“Harriet had no children, so she could travel without anything holding her back.” => replace “without anything holding her back” with constraints

“Even though they had differences, the sill accomplished alot.” => clarify who “they is” , replace sill with still and a lot is two words.

“Sojourner got hit because of her actcent. ” => accent not actcent

“Se accomplished this in 1849.” => she not se

“Although both women did great things in history, Harie had greater success,” => Hariet

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Honestly these are just basic spelling errors. The use of language is so stagnant – this is not a very well-written paper. You need to lose the colloquial phrases and say more (and show more research) rather than stating the obvious and having biased views in your paper.