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09/04/2019

Could someone edit my essay ;(?

QUESTION
Could someone edit my essay ;(?
Who am I?

I strive to be a righteous person and live an honest life that I am not ashamed of. I have inner ambitions as most do and I am changing my life in a positive manner. Several events cause a major impression to ones lifetime. Three important components of my life are that I am compassionate honest and observant. I have learned a lot from other people. I do things for the greater good being honorable and respectable as I go about my living.
I love to give to those around me thought and appreciation that everyone desires. I can stand up where others fall but not within pride but to carry them above me and use the weight of the world as my advantage. I open my hands to feed the hungry and share my soul to the fullest so others will open up their own.
Opening my arms to others has opened theirs to me. My heart likewise, being honest has put me in a respectable understanding in humanity. It is a behavior free from cheat or deceit and is about truthfulness. There was a time when my friends where stealing from neighbor’s homes in Honokaa just for fun. I did not want to steal my friend Riley’s play station three he recently got for his birthday. I felt I would not be able to look at him face to face if I did. This has educated me to carry the choice and not build my own defeat, so I do not have to chase my triumph endlessly. I have learned that someone appreciates everything we find and return to him or her. Therefore, I embrace every act of righteousness no

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Matter how little it may seem because it can become an immense change in a person’s life. My determination is nothing until its accomplished and solidified. Destination correction and devotion is the only path to triumph. I do what must do to complete things I have started and what I have sought to do. However, I do it for the greater good by being honorable and respectable as I go about living my life.
I am observant. I have learned a lot from other people. I started to realize the people who are really worth the time, who are true, and who somewhat care. I respect those people for putting in the time to one another
Most of the time, we already have what we need and loyalty has been becoming quite clear within this last month. There has always been a vast line between what is wanted and what is needed. Having great friends gives me hope to see more people aspiring within the truth of equality, truth itself. Everything does happen for a reason, and everyone has an affect in this world.
Every second, every tongue and every action is another weight to the balance. We are all in this together. This is an example of cause and effect, everything has a reason for its being. “Who am I?” I extend my hand to the feeble, encourage the meek, fortify myself and learn to rebuild others.

ANSWER
I see myself as someone who strives to be a righteous person. My heart and my mind seem to notice that I live an honest life that I am not ashamed of at all.. I have a sense of my inner ambitions, as many others do; however, I have decided to change my life in a positive manner.

There always seem to be several events that cause a major impression to one’s lifetime; which has prompted me to become aware of many important components of my own life. These components are as follows: 1) compassion, 2) honesty, 3) awareness.

I have learned much from other people; which has prompted me to do things for the greater good; while being honorable and respectable, as I go about my life. I also love to give to those around me my thoughtfulness of them, and my appreciation of them. . I can stand up where others fall; but not without humbleness to carry them above me, and use the weight of the world as my advantage. I open my hands to feed the hungry, and share my soul to the fullest so others will open up their own heart..

Opening my arms to others has opened theirs to me. My heart likewise, being honest, has put me in a respectable understanding of humanity. It is a behavior free from cheat or deceit; and is about truthfulness.

There was a time when my friends where stealing from neighbor’s homes in Honokaa just for fun. I did not want to steal my friend Riley’s play station there that he recently got for his birthday. I felt I would not be able to look at him face to face if I did. This has educated me to carry the choice: and not build my own defeat. Therefore, I do not have to chase my triumph endlessly. I have learned that someone appreciates everything we find and return to him or her. Also, therefore, I embrace every act of righteousness no matter how little it may seem. This is because it can become an immense change in a person’s life.

My determination is nothing until it is accomplished and solidified. I have noticed that destination correction, and devotion together, are the only path to triumph. I do what must be done to complete things I have started; and what I have sought to do. However, I feel my purpose is to do it for the greater good by being honorable and respectable as I go about living my life.

I am observant. I have learned a lot from other people. I started to realize who the people are that are really worth the time, and who are true, as well as, who somewhat care. I respect those people for putting in the time to one another.

Most of the time, we already have what we need; I have also noticed that the quality of loyalty has been become quite clear within this last month. There has always been a vast line between what is wanted and what is needed. Having great friends gives me hope to see more people aspiring within the truth of equality, truth itself.

Everything does seem to happen for a reason: and everyone has an affect in this world.
Every second, every tongue and every action is another weight to the balance. We are all in this together. This is an example of cause and effect as I have learned that everything has a reason for its being.

“Who am I?” I answer this inquiry by extending my hand to the feeble, encourage the meek;,and by fortifying myself to further learn how to rebuild others.