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09/07/2019

Help with thesis statement!!?

QUESTION
Help with thesis statement!!?
My research question is “How does video game violence effect children?”….What would be a good thesis statement???

ANSWER
(spelling correction: “how does video game violence AFFECT children?”) =P

This depends on what you will have in your body paragraphs.
for example, in a standard 5-paragraph essay, you’d have 3 body paragraphs.
Do some research, then maybe choose about 3 effects on children, cover them all in your thesis.
write out an outline of your essay… for example:

Introduction
Thesis Statement: While video games can be sources of entertainment and one great way to reduce stress, there may be some negative effects on children, such as effect 1, effect 2, effect 3.

Body
A. Effect 1
B. Effect 2
C. Effect 3

Conclusion
(your conclusion paragraph here)

hope this helps =)