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09/04/2019

how do i start off a college essay apllication with this topic! plz help?

QUESTION
how do i start off a college essay apllication with this topic! plz help?
Write an essay about yourself and the events in your life which have made a difference in the way you

im a drummer? how do i start my intro and thesis?

ANSWER
I will try several introductory sentences from what you’ve said about yourself.

I was born on September 18th, and the first thing my father did when the doctor put me on my mother’s stomach was put two drum sticks in my tiny hands.

When I was in the fifth grade, I joined the elementary school band.

I started out my life as a drummer trying to immitate my farther who was a drummer in the ——– band in the 1950s.

My interest in being a drummer started when my mother tried to quiet me while I was banging her pots and pans in the kitchen.