Close

09/04/2019

How should I write my concluding remark in my essay about the primary function of colleges?

QUESTION
How should I write my concluding remark in my essay about the primary function of colleges?
I am writing the essay on this thesis:
The primary function of colleges and universities should be to prepare students for the world of work by providing access to successful professors, teaching critical thinking skills specific to a major, and creating an environment for students to learn how to work with others.

What should I write at the end of the conclusion? A concluding remark.
I just need that and I am done with my essay. Thanks for your help!

ANSWER
Colleges and universities provide a reliable stepping stone into the world of work, often into better paying careers. While not having a college degree will not preclude one from obtaining a good job, a college degree will increase your chances greatly. A degree signifies to employers that you have been prepared for your specific area of expertise in a systemized and instructive way. College is widely accepted as a place where one has increased their skills and knowledge and also a place that helps create more well-rounded individuals, overall an attractive prospect to hiring companies.

(I hate to write it for you; just trying to help; if you do use, please use the ideas and skeleton i’ve set here, but please rephrase for yourself.)