How to make a good thesis statement for an informative essay?
I’m in grade 8, and I have to write an essay, so I picked the new technology glasses called space glasses and wrote 2 pages about it including all the necessary elements (essay map, thesis statement, body, conclusion, …) But when I showed it to my teacher she didn’t like my thesis statement. So i’m wondering, what are the elements you need for a good thesis statement. This is my first paragraph:
Almost every month there is new technology being made. Usually they are quick and careless redesigns of old devices just to get money. But technology is drastically improving. THESIS STATEMENT>>>>Recently, the company, META has gotten a breakthrough, something we’ve never seen before; Space glasses<<<