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09/08/2019

I am pleased with this first draft but I would appreciate any criticism.?

QUESTION
I am pleased with this first draft but I would appreciate any criticism.?
Public financing of political campaigns is a proposal with far too many provisions that approach unconstitutionality to be adopted into our electoral system. Although well meant, it’s undertone of the end justifies the means is far too foreign to our opinions regarding government. However, something must be done to eliminate corruption but not before our constitutional policies of habeas corpus and due process of law are upheld. In attempting to fix a broken electoral system, we shouldn’t begin by disregarding the laws put in place to uphold the equity we are attempting to restore; rather, we should approach the issue in a nonpartisan and unbiased manner to the end of successful, constitutional, and widely appeasing reformation.

ANSWER
Public financing of political campaigns is a proposal with far too many provisions that approach unconstitutionality to be adopted into our electoral system. Although well meant, it’s undertone of the end justifies the means is far too foreign to our opinions regarding government. However, something must be done to eliminate corruption but not before our constitutional policies of habeas corpus and due process of law are upheld. In attempting to fix a broken electoral system, we shouldn’t begin by disregarding the laws put in place to uphold the equity we are attempting to restore; rather, we should approach the issue in a nonpartisan and unbiased manner to the end of successful, constitutional, and widely appeasing reformation.