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09/08/2019

I need help with my essay.?

QUESTION
I need help with my essay.?
I am applying for a scholarship, and it needs to be 250 words, the problem is that I suck at grammar and have a hard time with my commas, and punctuation. So can anyone tell me ways to fix my essay, also is their any website that can help me be better at grammar. I am a senior, and my grammar skills aren’t really the best, that’s due to the fact that my teacher haven’t been really good or I have not been paying attention.

Here is my essay:

It’s time to go to college, and a step into the future. Going to college is a dream come true. My parents haven’t been to college and being the first one to go, is something special. The only problem about college is the money. That is why, I want to be able to win this scholarship. All my life, I have been a hard worker, and have spent countless hours on doing as much as possible. Every weekend, I went to the homeless shelter, and handed out food and clothes. Seeing the smile on people’s faces is the best part of all. Ever since my freshman year, I been working extremely hard. I been going to the homeless shelter every weekend and joined countless clubs. Some of my favorite clubs have been Flood, which is a Christian organization. The greatest part about flood, is that they help the poor. With Flood, I travel to cities, and give out food and shelter to people. Bring a smile to people’s faces is the best part of all. Besides having countless clubs, I am also an academic achieves. I have taken as much advance classes as possible. Having a challenge is something I like to do, and it will also make college easier. I am a hard worker, and have gone through many obstacles in my life. By having this scholarship, it will help me achieve my desire career.

ANSWER
It’s time to go to college, and a step into the future. Going to college is a dream come true for me – my parents haven’t been to college , and being the first one to go, is something special. The only problem that I have concerning college is raising the money ; that is why, I want to be able to win this scholarship.
All my life I have been a hard worker, and have spent countless hours doing as much as possible. Every weekend I went to the homeless shelter, and handed out food and clothing. Seeing the smiles on peoples” faces was the best part of all.
I have also been a part of several clubs: “Flood” ,…………..,……………… and ……………. . “Flood” is a Christian organization that helps the poor. With “Flood”, I travel to cities, and give out food and shelter to people. Besides enjoying clubs, I am also an academic achiever ; I have taken as many advanced classes as possible. Having a challenge is important to me , which is another reason I’m looking forward to College.
I am a hard worker, and have gone through many obstacles in my life ; having this scholarship will help me achieve my desired career choice.

Thank you for considering my application.