Thesis for the American Dream?

Thesis for the American Dream?
Here is what I have so far:

The American Dream promises perfection, happiness, and security yet,

I’m not sure how to end it. I’m trying to think of how it relates to an eating disorder at the same time because an eating disorder also promises perfection happiness and security… only its a false hope. Any ideas on how i could end my thesis? Thanks!

The American Dream promises hope, happiness, and security, but for those who suffer from an eating disorder, their quest to possess a “dream” body will turn into a nightmare of despair, sadness and self-doubt.

Ok, it took me awhile to answer because I played with the sentence for awhile, and even used a thesaurus to get the right words. At least it is something you can work with, too.

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