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09/04/2019

What is a good attention grabber for my essay? the topic is who is your hero/heroine?

QUESTION
What is a good attention grabber for my essay? the topic is who is your hero/heroine?
My hero is my dad, and im having a hard time thinking of an attention grabber for the first paragraph. Any ideas?

ANSWER
Be creative. Do not hold back. The best part about writing is that it is all made up and it comes from the heart. When you write something just think of the topic and start writing do not try and sound intellectual or educated until the end. You write down all your thoughts in paragraph form and everything but you do not make it all pretty until the end. Just throw it out of your mind. The first thing that pops into your mind let it go.

I was thinking something like relating it to the drug heroin or just drugs in general…. for example

Have you ever had the feeling that you were on drugs when you weren’t, but by the very presence of someone, someone who is your heroine?

and edit it to

Have you had the feeling of a powerful drug roaming through your body, simply to find that this feeling was caused by your heroine? Well my heroine is my dad! He has done……

So forth. Just carry it out! After grasping their attention try to carry it, flow with it.
I know that wasn’t that good but that just flew off the top of my head. And it is something I would write. (undiscovered novelist)